alOne

The imagery in this is an excellent metaphor for a rainy day and feeling down. The cloud overhead, the slump in the posture all point to that and the message comes through very well.

That being said, I feel like the rain shouldn't continue through the lines when it hits the body. Two lines on the head and another two on the body... all four should be erased after they drop on the person.

I believe that would improve this piece and give it the final push towards making it perfect.

Overall, great work with simple forms to create a powerful image.