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alOne by ArtBIT alOne by ArtBIT
...in a coat of raindrops,
I stands alone...

A Short Story About Love themed print.
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:iconmicahgoulart:
The imagery in this is an excellent metaphor for a rainy day and feeling down. The cloud overhead, the slump in the posture all point to that and the message comes through very well.

That being said, I feel like the rain shouldn't continue through the lines when it hits the body. Two lines on the head and another two on the body... all four should be erased after they drop on the person.

I believe that would improve this piece and give it the final push towards making it perfect.

Overall, great work with simple forms to create a powerful image.
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bellezza-corrutta Featured By Owner May 16, 2014
Beautiful vid, the first part reminds me somewhat of hegel's master/slave theory. lol x
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bellezza-corrutta Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014
Is the guy supposed to look a bit like an 'i'?
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ArtBIT Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes :)
But it supposed to look like number one as well.
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blackdragn Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2009
That is one sad I. I really like this piece. Simple yet the message is clear. I do think looking at the top comment that the opinion on the lines not going through the body is unfair. In 3D space, rain could be also behind, and in front of the subject. Great work!
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Philscbx Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2009
I too came to the same conclusion with 3D space.
Taking away lines of rain would remove the overall look.
The head & body already show rain deflected that could not be dodged.
A drip falling vertical from face might distract.
An iMe' with the blues.
Cheers.
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ewm Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
awwww :hug:
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JurgenDoe Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
'omg congrats on the DD :clap:
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ArtBIT Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
?
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JurgenDoe Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:pointandlaugh: April Fools :slow:
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ArtBIT Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Heh, nice try, but you didn't fool me, because I cannot have any more DDs since I had four already :P, I simply thought that you saw the Short Story for the first time and thought that its DD was fresh news... Oh well... of to bed...
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