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...in a coat of raindrops,
I stands alone...

A Short Story About Love themed print.

Critiques


:iconmicahgoulart:
The imagery in this is an excellent metaphor for a rainy day and feeling down. The cloud overhead, the slump in the posture all point to that and the message comes through very well.

That being said, I feel like the rain shouldn't continue through the lines when it hits the body. Two lines on the head and another two on the body... all four should be erased after they drop on the person.

I believe that would improve this piece and give it the final push towards making it perfect.

Overall, great work with simple forms to create a powerful image.
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:icontik-tik-tik:
great job!! love the concept!

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:iconhikihysterix:
aww this is cute.
it's simple too and it's easy to see/understand what it is.

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:la:THERE IS MORE VODKA IN THIS PISS THAN THERE IS PISS!
:iconsajrus06:
...je ne suis pas ce que je suis...
:iconungartattoo:
Tegege rules!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:daprints:
:iconjurgendoe:
'omg congrats on the DD :clap:

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Dancing is a vertical expression of a horizontal desire!
:iconjurgendoe:
:pointandlaugh: April Fools :slow:

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Dancing is a vertical expression of a horizontal desire!
:iconartbit:
Heh, nice try, but you didn't fool me, because I cannot have any more DDs since I had four already :P, I simply thought that you saw the Short Story for the first time and thought that its DD was fresh news... Oh well... of to bed...

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March 30
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