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Since so many people said that this piece lacks music, I've decided to add some...
There's this melody that has been echoing in my mind for some time now, and it fit perfectly in the movie...
...I composed the melody for the guitar originally, but since I don't own a guitar, I decided that piano sounds good too, since it can be easily emulated by the computer =D

There are some minor changes, to meet the new rhythm dictated by the melody, and the melody is actually a set of several separate patterns that I used to reduce the file size of the movie, and I had a real heck of a time to harmonize the animation, the music patterns and the rhythm :dead:.
So I apologize in advance, if you find it lame, but hey, I'm no musician ;P

The initial inspiration spark was triggered by one of the Tool songs, believe it or not.
The song is Jimmy, and the line that started it all is: "Until one and one are one, eleven..."

I hope you like it...
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Daily Deviation

Given 2006-09-25
A Short Story + music by =ArtBIT is definately "1" Flash animation that I think you should see from =ArtBIT's Gallery and "1" you should keep an eye on in the future. ( Featured by Age2003 )
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A wonderful and stirring animation, to be sure. The black and white with splashes of color add to the overall impact of the piece. The music (while slightly tinny) both simple and effective.

The conclusion was both somewhat saddening as he did not seem to find his 'other half' in the end, but beautiful nonetheless.

On the other hand, I noticed the use of symbols (for example, the car in cares) was more evident towards the end of the animation. While this is not necessarily a con, it made me wonder if the artist decided to add these halfway through the making of.

All in all, a powerful work that certainly deserves its title as a Daily Deviation.
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You have successfully managed to manipulate various letters, numbers and the heart to form a very effective animation with a suitable religious morale to it. I feel it was very well accompanied by the music.

Although, undoubtedly, there are many love-based animations, this one does it for me. What you did was very crafty and intelligent. I would argue that its simplicity has portrayed its effect. You have manoeuvred the movements and actions very professionally.

To gain full marks on originality and technique, I wouldn't leave the ending do loose. I would make it straight forward, but go slightly further with it. After all, the verse you have chosen to include, is a very uplifting, confidence-restoring verse - so the ending should fit it suitably.

It was an extremely good idea, in my opinion, to link it into a bible verse as it emphasizes its purpose. Very well done. It is clear that there is a lot of fine work and a good investment of time put into this :)
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconflyingheartsplz::iconloveloveplz::iconflyingheartsplz:
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sack-back Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Great piece. I am against love.
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GlowingRadiance Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
D'awww. This moved meh hearts matey. arrr
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LovelyIcePrincess Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
nice one!
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Honey537 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist
This made me soo saaad;(
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:iconkida-neechan:
Kida-neechan Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013
Aww i loved it so much :iconiloveyouplz: it's really nice the way you did this flash it really is unique and shows your creative side too :iconiloveitplz:
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:iconartbit:
ArtBIT Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks, I'm really glad you liked it :)
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:iconmemamo3:
Memamo3 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Thats to sad, and heart warming I cried a little
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:iconartbit:
ArtBIT Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:hug:
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:iconmemamo3:
Memamo3 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
^-^ seriously, keep up the good work my friend
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:iconq-x:
Q-x Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
Woo, that's pretty neat. c:
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:iconartbit:
ArtBIT Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks! :)
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:iconbunbunzzz:
bunbunzzz Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Svaka cast na DD, animacija je zaista predivno uradjena :clap:
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:iconartbit:
ArtBIT Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Heh, hvala :)
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:iconbunbunzzz:
bunbunzzz Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nema na cemu :3
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:icondzodan:
Dzodan Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012  Student Photographer
Svaka cast Djordje!
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:iconartbit:
ArtBIT Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hvala kralju :)
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:iconbeautyisoptional:
BeautyIsOptional Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is absolutely beautiful.
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BojanPapic Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Cestitam na DD, ovaj rad je predstavljen u blogu: [link] grupe:
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Svaka cast! ;)
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:icondeppspirategirl:
deppspirategirl Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2012
i have been so sad lately thinking i would die alone... this gave me HOPE. thank you.
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:iconartbit:
ArtBIT Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:hug:
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:iconsaratale:
SaraTale Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012
great joooob it's awesome
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:iconartbit:
ArtBIT Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks :)
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:iconjeseniavlopez:
JeseniaVLopez Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you now I feel like I musn't quit trying to find the ONE for me. I'll die trying.
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:iconnavio-tantra:
Navio-Tantra Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA SO SWEEEETTTTTT
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:iconcquake:
CQuake Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2012   Digital Artist
I am going to die of cuteness.
I so looooove this flashie, I can't stop watching to it.
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:iconartbit:
ArtBIT Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hahaha I'm glad you like it :)
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:iconkuromu:
Kuromu Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2012   Digital Artist
Incredibly moving - and a reminder that everyone is just a one, just like everyone else. No matter what loss we experience, there are many other ones - who are just as important as one another, even if not to us.

PS: I'M A SAP AND I CRIED.
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jordanevil10 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012
i love the video
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:iconartbit:
ArtBIT Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you, I'm glad that you do :)
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:iconhinpink:
HinPink Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011  Student Writer
this is one of the sweetest things I've seen in a while! I love it :)
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:iconartbit:
ArtBIT Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks :)
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:iconhinpink:
HinPink Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Student Writer
you're welcome
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SaeTemaki Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
OMFG THIS IS AMAZING!!!!!
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:iconartbit:
ArtBIT Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :thanks:
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SaeTemaki Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
your weldcome! :D

It's really clever how you did things like with the dot at the beginning. very clever.

How long did this take you?
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:iconartbit:
ArtBIT Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Heh, thanks. It was made a weekend back in 2006 :)
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:iconreaper-grell:
Reaper-Grell Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2011
That almost made me cry...
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:iconartbit:
ArtBIT Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:hug:
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:iconkharemi:
Kharemi Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
thant's Just Awesome :) :clap:
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:iconartbit:
ArtBIT Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:bow:
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:iconlightlawliet123:
lightlawliet123 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
I almost cried during that
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:iconartbit:
ArtBIT Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:hug:
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:iconlightlawliet123:
lightlawliet123 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
I almost cried during that
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:iconzeldaluver27:
zeldaluver27 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
i absolutely LOVE that!!!! :heart: :heart: :heart:
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:iconartbit:
ArtBIT Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
And I love Zelda! :hug:
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xXxShortcakexXx Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Ok just saying that was sweetly awsume i think i cryed!
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:iconartbit:
ArtBIT Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:petting:
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xXxShortcakexXx Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha
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:iconartbit:
ArtBIT Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
;)
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