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A Short Story About Love by $ArtBIT:iconArtBIT:


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Artist's Comments

Since so many people said that this piece lacks music, I've decided to add some...
There's this melody that has been echoing in my mind for some time now, and it fit perfectly in the movie...
...I composed the melody for the guitar originally, but since I don't own a guitar, I decided that piano sounds good too, since it can be easily emulated by the computer =D

There are some minor changes, to meet the new rhythm dictated by the melody, and the melody is actually a set of several separate patterns that I used to reduce the file size of the movie, and I had a real heck of a time to harmonize the animation, the music patterns and the rhythm :dead:.
So I apologize in advance, if you find it lame, but hey, I'm no musician ;P

The initial inspiration spark was triggered by one of the Tool songs, believe it or not.
The song is Jimmy, and the line that started it all is: "Until one and one are one, eleven..."

I hope you like it...
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Disclaimer
This work is not in the public domain. This work is copyright © Djordje Ungar ($ArtBIT) 2006. All rights reserved.
You may not use and/or reproduce my artwork in any way without my explicit and written permission.

Daily Deviation

Given 2006-09-25

A Short Story + music by =ArtBIT is definately "1" Flash animation that I think you should see from =ArtBIT's Gallery and "1" you should keep an eye on in the future. (Featured by ^Age2003)

Critiques


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A wonderful and stirring animation, to be sure. The black and white with splashes of color add to the overall impact of the piece. The music (while slightly tinny) both simple and effective.

The conclusion was both somewhat saddening as he did not seem to find his 'other half' in the end, but beautiful nonetheless.

On the other hand, I noticed the use of symbols (for example, the car in cares) was more evident towards the end of the animation. While this is not necessarily a con, it made me wonder if the artist decided to add these halfway through the making of.

All in all, a powerful work that certainly deserves its title as a Daily Deviation.
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:iconhalloweenfiends:
Superb job!:trophy:

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:iconmajojoy:
Awesome Job!!!! :clap: i really love it!! congratulations!!

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i love it. the search is never easy is it?

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:icondigitalspectre:
This is actually one of the best animations I have seen a while now. Great job.

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:iconartbit:
Why thank you. I'm glad you liked it =D

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Pretty disco.

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:iconkatat0nik:
Aww this is so sweet with the music!:happycry: You did a great job matching the music with the animation - I know that's not easy to do :hug:

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wow dude awesome... i loved it

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